Gale of the night

Pandora · Post by **Pandora** » Fri Jul 01, 2005 1:50 pm

This a total metiphoric like thing you know saying something and meaning something else. Well, anyways I'll undestand if you don't get it.

She waits in silance

for the morning to come

shrowded in the dark veil of the night

that trails into the endless black above

broken only by the few stars who dare

challange it, busting holes of bright white

through the darkness, sending rays of hope

for she who seeks the light

~Midnight~

Shadowdragon · Post by **Shadowdragon** » Sat Jul 02, 2005 9:02 am

I like it. It can have many meanings. It realtes to more then one person thats generally a sign of a good poem.

Aspaheir · Post by **Aspaheir** » Sat Jul 02, 2005 11:14 am

*clap* *clap* *clap*

I love it Pandora/AkariusKyra88/Midnight!!!

+ Silver - Orbs + · Post by **+ Silver - Orbs +** » Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:46 am

very poetic. makes a good riddle. people will be wondering for years, what did it apply to?

Pandora · Post by **Pandora** » Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:07 pm

It has quite a few meanings actuly. One would be a woman waiting for her lover to return to her,another would be someone who is trying to pupose or meaning. And another would be some who is waited for hard times to pass, and the list just goes on.

When I wrote this poem I wasn't going for just one them. I wanted the reader to find their own personal meaning to it. I know what it means to me,I wrote it. Its more of what it means to other people.

+ Silver - Orbs + · Post by **+ Silver - Orbs +** » Thu Aug 04, 2005 6:46 am

maybe you could get it published?

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