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Theo walked down the black marble hall way to the dungeons of his tower. as he entered the dungeons he heard a grunting and he saw three brown warty hobgoblins. the stentch was unbearable! he pulled out his sword and impaled all three with one strike! he walked towards a small man hanging from the roof and said "well have you decided to talk and tell me the whereabouts of the dragonstone or to be tourtered by boiling oil?" the man spat in theo's face and replied "ah go kiss a boot!" Theo looked the man in the eye and grabbed a long iron stick that had been lying in a fire and poked the man with it. the stench of burning hair filled the room as the man burned "all right all right ill tell" he shouted "the dragonstone is in telio down by the river dwell it is gaurded by a gryphon and has magic protecting it as well". Theo nodded and walked over too a wall and pulled a lever the man was pulled up through a hole in the roof.

well what do u think. BE HONEST!!!!!!!!!

Could be longer and less haphazard.

so you dont like my story

Naw I hate it

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commander call the artillary and pull those calvary officers over to the left our first charge is straight at manofthewolf we must then use artilary slingofgod and fire at his ship on irish waters