Poem: Dawn

[alondor]

This poem came to me around 7:38 tonight. While it is also on my Deviantart page I want yur guys' opinions as well



When the moon's shadow dims
When truth nears its end

There you will find me
Waiting for a new beginning

[Kojack]

I like it. It sounds like something that you would put in the end of a book that will become the first part of a series of books. It paints a picture. I can imagine a warrior of some sort (or some type of intelligent being) sitting on a cliff overlooking a forest at night as the moon goes down and the sun begins to rise. As if the warrior is starring towards their future wondering what lies ahead as they continue down this path that they call their life.

Well that is what I gather from it anyway.

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

I think it sounds great. Just finished reading a series and that sounds like a perfect ending line.