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Poem: Dawn
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:55 pm
by alondor
This poem came to me around 7:38 tonight. While it is also on my Deviantart page I want yur guys' opinions as well
When the moon's shadow dims
When truth nears its end
There you will find me
Waiting for a new beginning
Re: Poem: Dawn
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:29 pm
by Kojack
I like it. It sounds like something that you would put in the end of a book that will become the first part of a series of books. It paints a picture. I can imagine a warrior of some sort (or some type of intelligent being) sitting on a cliff overlooking a forest at night as the moon goes down and the sun begins to rise. As if the warrior is starring towards their future wondering what lies ahead as they continue down this path that they call their life.
Well that is what I gather from it anyway.
Re: Poem: Dawn
Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:49 pm
by Forgotten Dragon's Ire
I think it sounds great. Just finished reading a series and that sounds like a perfect ending line.